Yugioh GX V2

this is my first fan fic i hope u like it=
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Protagonist(1)=Jaden Yugi
Protagonist(2)=Alexis Yugi
Protagonist(3)=Cyrus Truesdale
protagonist(4)=Haya Truesdale
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CHAPTER 1=THE AWAKENING
Jaden=[snoring]
MOM=[shouts]Wake up![pauses a bit]Wake up Jaden!
Jaden=[scared]Im up im up...Whats the hurry?its not like i have to go for a test or something..
MOM=Yes you do Jaden..
Jaden=OMG! i am supposed to go!wheres Alexis?Isnt she supposed to aswell?
MOM=yes she did.But she couldnt wake you up so she went off...
Jaden=Danm i gotta get to duel acdemy!
MOM=arent you gonna hav breakfast?
jaden=i cant belive im saying this but not today...See ya aunt!
MOM=Bye!be carefull...
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chapter 2=THE STRANGE ENCOUNTER
Jaden=Gotta get to duel academy's test!
Random person=Hey slow down kid you'll hurt yourself..
Jaden=im sorry but im in a hurry..[suddenly collides with a stranger]Oh man im really sorry!uh my cards they all are on the floor!
Stranger=Its ok sonny..let me help you pick them up...
Jaden=thanks!
Stranger=No problem..here you go.
Jaden=thanks again..lets see heres sparkman..clayman..avain.burstinatrix neos..............................Oh man i think i lost one card!there only 39!
Starnger=Hmm..wait i can help you..[opens a case]Ah the perfect one.take this card it already likes u....
Jaden=Sweet thanks old timer..Hey wait a second u look so much like my father you know Yugi moto?
Stranger=Err...yes im a big fan..too bad he left..anyway didnt you hav to go somewhere
jaden=huh you r right...See ya!
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Chapter 3=The Renunion of best freinds
Jaden=Ah!i made it..
Alexis=Jaden is that you?
Jaden=I guess so...
Alexis=hahaha..nice one!Guess what?
Jaden=hmm..dont know
Alexis=I passed!
Jaden=Good for you sis..hey look who it is...the Truesdales
Cyrus=Wassup Yugi's?
Haya=Hi guys!
Alexis=hi haya!nice to see you
Jaden=nothing much bro..did u get tested?
Haya & Cyrus=yes and we both passed..wht bout you?
Alexis=i did and i passed too..congrats guys
Haya=same to u
cyrus=What about you Jaden?
HEAD TESTER=This is Dr.Crowler speaking!Jaden yugi..[whispers]the late comer please report for your test duel..
Jaden=All right!this is it guys..my turn to throw down!
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Chapter4=The duel for life
Dr.crowler=Cmon lets get on with this...
Jaden=o ok cheif..Get your game on!!
crowler=Dont you know who ur dealing with..
Jaden=Yes i do..im dealing with a tester
Crowler=*-_-!u dont know who i am!o forget it lets duel!
Jaden=Ill start things off..
crowler=Go ahead..slacker
Jaden=my turn my draw!awesome i play E-Emergency call!and take Avain to my hand..
everyone in the hall=wow elemntal heroes!hes the son of the king of games!
Crowler=wht a weak monster!pathetic!and u were the king of games son.hmph..
Jaden=i dont care wht ever you say!but this monster is strong!i use polymerization!Go Flame wingman..and i summon sparkman!throw a face down and callit a turn!your go!
crowler=whtever..i summon ancient gear golem..of them !!
Jaden=What the!u destroyed spark man!uh man!
Jaden= my turn sweet!
Winged kuriboh=kurr!
Jaden=huh!?oh ok..i set this monster face down and this trap card!
crowler=u dont say if it is a trap or a spell!anyway my turn!i atk that face down monster!HUH is tht another weak monster!! ...pathetic!Take ur life points to 0 kid its over!
Jaden=Ya right!
crowler=Huh?!
Jaden=its destroyed though but now i use hero signal to get spark man!
crowler=wht!anyway who cares go forth your last pathetic move
Jaden=Here goes!sweet a polymerization!i activate it and fuse Sparkman and flame wingman!to form Shinig Flare wingman!
crowler=whats so special!only 2500 atk points
Alexis,Cyrus,Haya=i think Jaden won!
Jaden= my monsters special ability!it gets 300 for each hero monsters in my grave and thts 4000 atk!
crowler=what but how?
Jaden=Go Attack it!!
Crowler=only a 1000 dmage!
Jaden=now comes in its special ability!
Crowler=What the?
Jaden=yes!when this monster destroys a monster its atk point goes to your life points!
Everyone=WHAT!!Jaden won!!
Jaden=lets do this...shining flare wing man SHING SORD ATTAK!
crowler=oh noooooooo!!
Jaden=yes i won!!
Crowler=u passed!
Jaden yay im goin to DUEL ACADMY TOO guys!
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THE END(for now,will mke new later)

comments anyone?

Nice one Ticho..(Man need to get tht Spelling right ^_^! ) Anyways Funny ,Enjoyable and Fun !
Overall nice !

hahahaha, nice one man , but you need to get the Spelling Nice but it's still Great Fiction !!

Cool.
Maybe add spaces between

'jaden=bla bla bla'

You could replace = with something to make it look more neat, fix up the spelling as they've said.